I wrote February at first (probably 'cause it's still freezing outside) but it seems to have become March today.
Over the weekend, as you finalize your essays, please consider doing the following: 1. Remove the templates from your body paragraphs. What words do you need to add in between the sentences to help create flow? 2. Add in your intro paragraph before your body paragraphs, and your concluding paragraph after the body ones. (Five paragraphs in total) 3. Read through, then edit and revise your essay to the best of your abilities. 4. Record yourself reading your essay or have someone else read it to you. Have you been repetitive? Does your essay flow well? Is your thinking organized? Are your sentence types and beginnings varied? 5. Bring a printed copy of your essay to class on Monday. Watershed Proposals - I've reviewed all of them and feedback has been provided. I am missing a couple of people sharing their proposals with me. You know who you are so please get them to me ASAP. Next Week: Bamfield Parent Meeting on Wednesday evening. |
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